I wrote this poem approximately 10 minutes before publishing it… simply wrote it on the fly.
I hope you all like the first poem I share on MuslimScribbler.com.
A conversation I had over the phone last night inspired me to write it; we discussed the important pillar of any relationship called trust, and so here it is:
Trusts me not
To love is to trust
Rose, a Rose I do trust
Under a spell I have fallen
Skies a heaven unspoken
Thoughts of fear only I hear
My dear, oh my dear
Ever have I learned from my past?
Never, never does it last
One love, only love
Trusts me not
I don’t learn from my past either.
I Trust You.
Oh how very sweet Scribbler. I trust you too. 🙂
🙁 thank you all… definitely nice to be trusted… thank you
Do you trust me ?
I would give you the chance to prove yourself trustworthy :)… but then again… Aliens are kinda weird haha
Would my cell number do ?
hmmm… good question UFO. Do you trust me, Scribbler?
Oh, and so totally jealous about not getting UFO’s cell number. 🙁 I feel unloved, lol….
you both (LS and UFO) are perfect for each other lol
*runs around like a headless chicken* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
You guys freak me out!!
I’m so NOT commenting again!!
ahahahaha, don’t run away UFO… we don’t bite… unless you ask of course 😉
You can always count on UFO to bring some life to a blog post… though comments are irrelevant, there’s some action nonetheless haha
Irrelevant ?!?!?!
*deep sigh* No one understands the wisdom behind my words…
aww UFO hehe… you’re always welcome to share your irrelevant comments here 🙂
*sneaks through your blog* I’ve come to take a comment of yours ..
(It’s pay back time! No more UFO! From now onwards I shall deal with you guys)
Wondering if any of you noticed something about this poem… take the first letter of every line… line them up next to each other… and see if it says anything
To
Rose
Under
Skies
Thoughts
My
Ever
Never
One
Trusts
?
To Rose under skies…My thoughts never ever one trust ?
UFO,
just the first letter of every line… not the first word of every line 🙂
*slaps her forehead* LETTER!
Got it! It’s ” TRUST ME NOT “
Great! Now I’ll compose a poem on the same pattern but with a different message i.e. ” Forget Me Not “.
i love the poem
Thank you skittl3s