She trusts me not?
I wrote this poem approximately 10 minutes before publishing it… simply wrote it on the fly.
I hope you all like the first poem I share on MuslimScribbler.com.
A conversation I had over the phone last night inspired me to write it; we discussed the important pillar of any relationship called trust, and so here it is:
Trusts me not
To love is to trust
Rose, a Rose I do trust
Under a spell I have fallen
Skies a heaven unspoken
Thoughts of fear only I hear
My dear, oh my dear
Ever have I learned from my past?
Never, never does it last
One love, only love
Trusts me not
23/10/2008 at 4:53 pm Permalink
I don’t learn from my past either.
I Trust You.
23/10/2008 at 5:15 pm Permalink
Oh how very sweet Scribbler. I trust you too.
23/10/2008 at 6:43 pm Permalink
23/10/2008 at 7:13 pm Permalink
Do you trust me ?
23/10/2008 at 7:43 pm Permalink
I would give you the chance to prove yourself trustworthy :)… but then again… Aliens are kinda weird haha
23/10/2008 at 8:54 pm Permalink
Would my cell number do ?
24/10/2008 at 12:40 am Permalink
hmmm… good question UFO. Do you trust me, Scribbler?
Oh, and so totally jealous about not getting UFO’s cell number.
I feel unloved, lol….
24/10/2008 at 1:40 am Permalink
you both (LS and UFO) are perfect for each other lol
24/10/2008 at 8:29 am Permalink
*runs around like a headless chicken* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
You guys freak me out!!
I’m so NOT commenting again!!
24/10/2008 at 9:38 am Permalink
ahahahaha, don’t run away UFO… we don’t bite… unless you ask of course
24/10/2008 at 1:09 pm Permalink
You can always count on UFO to bring some life to a blog post… though comments are irrelevant, there’s some action nonetheless haha
24/10/2008 at 9:18 pm Permalink
Irrelevant ?!?!?!
*deep sigh* No one understands the wisdom behind my words…
24/10/2008 at 10:34 pm Permalink
aww UFO hehe… you’re always welcome to share your irrelevant comments here
24/10/2008 at 10:49 pm Permalink
*sneaks through your blog* I’ve come to take a comment of yours ..
(It’s pay back time! No more UFO! From now onwards I shall deal with you guys)
28/10/2008 at 12:26 am Permalink
Wondering if any of you noticed something about this poem… take the first letter of every line… line them up next to each other… and see if it says anything
28/10/2008 at 1:25 pm Permalink
To
Rose
Under
Skies
Thoughts
My
Ever
Never
One
Trusts
?
28/10/2008 at 1:27 pm Permalink
To Rose under skies…My thoughts never ever one trust ?
28/10/2008 at 1:28 pm Permalink
UFO,
just the first letter of every line… not the first word of every line
28/10/2008 at 1:30 pm Permalink
*slaps her forehead* LETTER!
Got it! It’s ” TRUST ME NOT “
28/10/2008 at 1:32 pm Permalink
Great! Now I’ll compose a poem on the same pattern but with a different message i.e. ” Forget Me Not “.
10/02/2009 at 4:09 am Permalink
i love the poem
10/02/2009 at 11:20 am Permalink
Thank you skittl3s